tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050936018092788038.post7156687619328633090..comments2017-11-24T22:21:15.500-05:00Comments on Joyful Living: Fall Virgina Apples & Farmsb.ellenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07698612446775610207noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050936018092788038.post-30690790975540508182008-09-16T22:05:00.000-04:002008-09-16T22:05:00.000-04:00Thank you dear brother Vaughn for your help. I typ...Thank you dear brother Vaughn for your help. I typically type these up so fast in between needs of babies who knows what I'm really meaning to say.=} Love you bb.ellenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07698612446775610207noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050936018092788038.post-12396940098542022742008-09-16T21:30:00.000-04:002008-09-16T21:30:00.000-04:00Just a factual error... or poor sentence structure...Just a factual error... or poor sentence structure.<BR/><BR/>"Last weekend we went to Virgina where my Mom grew up and spent some time with her family. On Saturday we spent the morning at their Orchard's and packing shed."<BR/><BR/>Who is "their" in their Orchard?<BR/><BR/>Your sentence makes sense but is is a little unclear. You might consider reworking it a little.<BR/><BR/>VaughnVaughnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17585389437544295045noreply@blogger.com